Is so possessive about me
Never leaves me isolated
In crowded areas
Accompany me always
In my solitude !
Someone,
Is so concerned about me
Tempt me always
To share the unshared words with her
Because others wont comprehend
What I really mean!
When I try ,
To build relations with others
She ensures me that
They are all ordinary people
Drenched in their own self interest
Just making friendship with me .. !!
I am your truth
I am your companion
Yes, My Loneliness never leaves me alone ever!!
31 comments:
nice one !!
but why such condition ?? to make loneliness as your companion :/
@ Deepa
Thanks Deepa :)
Its not actually my condition, just wanted to write something and at last came up with this.
haha nice one! i thought it was a bout a girl or someone who never leaves u alone..! lol
there's something about feeling lonely while with someone, that hurts and cuts deeper than being alone and lonely...
and if that person should leave... stop caring...
oh i have conflicting thoughts on this one :)
paradox.
nice, liked it..!
That was sweet. Loneliness would never make us lonely because we would always have loneliness as our companion.
Nice one! :)
A nice paradox! Loneliness that never leaves you lonely! A bit spooky too :P
Nice. :)
@ Palak
Glad to hear that you liked it Palak. Keep visiting!
@ Kay
Thanks for dropping by! :)
@ sakhii••
Keep visiting !
@ sepo
Nice to hear that you liked it. :)
@ Nethra
Feels like I was successful in conveying my message! :)
@ Pooja Menon
Main aur mera tanhai, aksar ye baatein kartein hain :P
@ Chocolatelover
Thanks! Keep visiting :)
lovely and true...
@ Shruti
Thanks Shruti. Keep visiting :)
akla chalo re!loneliness is a big pain and endless one too but if u see closely u are not lonelyatleast i m ur friend.
@ sleeping beauty
Thanks for dropping by. Keep visiting! :)
wow.. good one..:)
i liked the twist coz i was expecting it to be someone special who never leaves u alone rather than loneliness..
@ Mehak
Thanks Mehak. Glad to hear that you liked it. Keep visiting! :)
creative writing..loved it :)
@ An Ordinary Girl
Thank you so much! :)
we are born alone..die alone..rest is a fake story...Osho has said that lonliness is sick and alonness is great...
@ Anirudh Induchudan
Rightly said. Thanks for dropping by!
Nice one.
I wonder how magnificently lonliness inspire every soul...
I liked these lines the most
"They are all ordinary people drenched in their own self interest, just making friendship with me"
Isn't this a fact of life directly or indirectly
all are self centered and only care about their self interest???
Beautiful......
Crafted nicely. Good imagination you have.
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