It was a Saturday night and Ronit couldn’t think of a better way than going out for dinner with his childhood sweetheart Poonam, to sort out the quarrel that they had last night. Ronit sensed there was something seriously wrong this time because of the painful silence they shared between them. After dinner was over they were driving back home. Poonam asked Ronit to pull over because she wanted to talk. She told him that it’s not working for them anymore and her feelings had changed, so probably it was time to move on.
A silent tear slid down Ronit’s cheek as he slowly reached into his pocket and passed her a folded note. At that moment, a drunk driver was speeding down that very same street. He swerved right into the drivers seat, killing Ronit.
Miraculously, Poonam survived. Remembering the note, she pulled it out and read it.
" Without your love, I would die."
12 comments:
Interesting!!!! But you killed him :P Can imagine what the gal will be going through now!!!
oh god!!! so tragic!!!
Poonam? x( :p
tune bhi maar dala Ronit ko :P
short and good one..
beautiful....short but filled with dramatic emotions
poor girl; great story.
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it wudve had a happier n sweet ending if he had survived..
anyway nice work.. :)
hmmm... not close to reality but love stories are always special...
good one :)
so fairy.....
touching.
very touching.
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