He lights up her soul with a burning flame
Where ecstasy and passion become the same
The night is warm from where their bodies danced
As she looks into his eyes she becomes entranced.
He holds her tight and pulls her close in his arms
She surrenders and falls helpless to his charms
He knowingly brought her mind and body to the brink
She lost track of time and whatever she was about to think.
Determination and eagerness to please makes up for any lack
As she gives her everything and doesn't hold back
As their hunger and need for each other becomes more intent
His hold on her heart and soul would not relent.
Content to just rest in his arms throughout the day
Passionate feelings and erotic touches mount higher as they lay
Feeling his lips deeply kissing her on an enchanted night
There is nothing more exciting than her lover's delight. __________________________________________________________________________
10 comments:
That was simply adorable! Loved it.
I wish I could write like this..feel the passion to do justice..I guess you have to be so much in love to bring forth this kind of passion..lucky girl you have..
Well written I really liked the third stanza
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I really enjoy your blog :)
रंग के त्यौहार में
सभी रंगों की हो भरमार
ढेर सारी खुशियों से भरा हो आपका संसार
यही दुआ है हमारी भगवान से हर बार।
आपको और आपके परिवार को होली की खुब सारी शुभकामनाये इसी दुआ के साथ आपके व आपके परिवार के साथ सभी के लिए सुखदायक, मंगलकारी व आन्नददायक हो।
Lovely post..
Cannot set my heart away from these two lines:"As their hunger and need for each other becomes more intent
His hold on her heart and soul would not relent."
Thank you Alcina. Glad to hear that you liked it! :)
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