Dear love,
Its too late now to wonder why, you should have got a clue, when the pain I was going through was staring you right in the face.You obviously could not see the tears behind my painted smile.You chose to be in your own little world and think everything was bed of roses. It was rosy but it was full of thorns. I constantly got scratched and nicked everywhere I turned.
You should have given me the love and respect that I always craved for, and treated me like before. But time has passed to dwell on all these things you could have done …
perhaps then I would have never left!
24 comments:
Sad :(
Can feel the pain of the writer.
Wonderful!!
Thanks Nidhi! :)
Thats what we mull over again and again right after the break up right ? It hurts , hurts hell and i can just relate to your pain , though i cant step in your shoes .. Hope you get out of it soon and keep writing , it will help apart from sticking to friends ! Tc :)
@ adreamygal - No, this one is not about myself. I just thought about how it feels when love changes, and so wrote this. Nothing related to me! Have always been a happy soul by God's grace. :)
Thanks for dropping by! :)
Ohh if it is not about you then you are an awesome writer. Cos you actually made me feel that you wrote it out of breakup pain. Your words are so convincing !
@ Anita - Thanks a lot. Those words mean a lot to me! :)
born out of ecstasy, the letter was a cry of letting go yet holding back the best part of life. loved your writing.
Extremely honest,and very well said..I can relate to every word you have written,I have always loved reading your posts...its great coming back here.
@ Sancheeta - Thank you so much for dropping by! :)
@ Alpana - Thanks a lot! :)
I can relate so emotionally to this. The words of a song that i've been recently playing again and again are:
I need to be strong.
Oh, I won't forget you.
I need to be strong.
Oh, I won't forget you.
In life, we experience different stages. Alas not all relationships are meant to survive, but we must try to remember the good times, and let those bad ones fade away
@ Larry - Yeah Larry I quite agree with you. Thanks for your visit here! :)
some words unsaid that remain in hearts are what causes the pain that none can heal. it said the same thing.. yet again creating all new impact. perhaps i won't have left...
we keep on wondering "what if?" its better if we ask why and get over the confusion or misunderstanding.
nice piece.
@ Deepika - The best thing to do is try to forget about the past and move on! :)
That is easier said than done... Isn't it?
But that is easier said than done.... Ain't it?
Yes surely!
hey good one romeo....but very painful....
Thanks Aditi! :)
hi,
this one's so beautifully written. I can relate so much to it...
Hey Binitha, welcome to my blog. Nice to see that you enjoyed your stay here! :)
IS it necessary to be loved back when you love someone?..it is the only question i would like to ask you after reading this.
This was a break-up letter and is written when the love that existed between the two faded away. So over here love was there between them previously and then everything changed!
And to answer your question NO it is not necessary to be loved back when you love someone!
Anyways, thanks for dropping by!
Keep visiting :)
Perfectly composed..keep it up :)
Thanks a lot Gargi! :)
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