When Rohan and Priyanka looked into each other’s eyes for hours holding hands for the first time, little did Rohan know that after six years it would be so uncomfortable to look into each other’s eyes even for a fraction of a second.
The first kiss on each others lips, the endless and tender hug, roaming around the entire house with Priyanka on his back, taking her in his arms, dancing with each other to the tune of a romantic instrumental, fighting with each other and then rolling with laughter - all these came as a flashback suddenly when Rohan met Priyanka after almost three years of their break up. When they were in love, the entire world didn’t seem to have existed for them. Lost in each others thoughts and love. Every time they hugged each other, Priyanka used to murmur, “ Please never leave me Rohan, I won’t be able to live without you.” And Rohan used to reply in an assuring voice “Sweetheart, in this false world of false truths, I know only one thing true… I’d give up everything just to be with you.” Priyanka felt the safest when she was in his arms and there was no place for anyone else between them. But, now it has become an unbridgeable gap between the two of them.
Promises to see each other grow old together and innocent hearts were broken. Nothing seemed to work out, when they had to go through a phase of long distance relationship. Rohan did almost everything he could have, to never let go his love. He went to meet her almost across the country, just to make things right. Just to see that love in her eyes for him once again. He never realized that things had changed so much. Still with an everlasting hope, he kissed her saying everything would be perfect again sweetheart, before boarding his train back home…But little did he know, that it would be the last time their lips ever touched each others, that this goodbye didn’t mean only till tomorrow, but for a lifetime…
42 comments:
There is a sequel? Something's missing.
Well, the rest was sweet...i mean the description of their love and ya, I've witnessed so many times that long distance relationships don't work.
that was short and sweet :)well i too felt there wassmthng missing in the story ,probably the end part should have been more crisp ? but nevertheless your story depicts reality and indeed love does , esp during long distance , develops cracks , never to b mended again ..very well written :)
@ Nethra - I don't know the sequel, as it is yet to happen !
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@ adreamygal - Glad to hear that you liked my post ! And indeed the story depicts reality.
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The intimacy and togetherness that is normally associated with love suggests that we are likely to be more affected by the words and actions of the one we love. The views of significant others normally bear more weight than those of generalized others. The emotions/love/pain that we feel when they are gone, are often strong and extreme on either side of the emotion continuum.
The truth is that loving and being in love can hurt; too much at times. And life is when you learn to live with hurt as the lessons of life and! :)
Loved your post. keep 'writing'! :P
..in love with me and life! :)
I liked the way you narrated the story and the language employed.You are a very good writer.Looking forward to seeing more of your blog
@ H.Toufga - If my post described your status, that does not mean in any way that you can copy paste my entire post to your own blog by editing the character's name and using "HE" and "SHE" in place of it, without even having the least courtesy of asking for my permission before doing so. This is plagiarism.
Your blog post link in which you copy pasted this entire post of mine-
http://hind-toufga.blogspot.com/2010/05/4th-year-anniversary.html
If you don't possess any ideas of your own, why do you feel the need to blog and waste other bloggers time by making them read your copy pasted materials. They can well find the stuff in the original writer's blog itself.
You have the wish to become famous but not the brains to even write a blog post on your own !
Get a life ! Try reading books and newspapers to increase your vocab, then try and write a post all by yourself rather than copying others post.
excellent write up:)...good playlist:)...enjoyed my time:)thank u
this post is related to your life??
well i really don't like long distance relationship at all.. they always create misunderstanding between two people n finally broke up :(
its so uncomfortable to be with someone you still love knowing he/she don't love you back anymore :(
wow...tat came strong... do try to protect ur blog by adding html to not to copy...jus a suggestion.take care...:)sorry but cod,nt stop myself from reading ur comments:)no ofence
Nice blog =) the story was touching!
Lovely Post Romeo! The language used, the situations described, were good. Sad to know that you were a victim of plagiarism! Keep writing. :)
I know this... love was there and suddenly it disappeared.. the promises turned to ashes.. and people just became memories..
Wonderful words!! Kp up!!
Seems that some thing is missing. And I agree with Nethra that this seems more of sequel.
Though it is good one.
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i know that i am putting this on every blog, but yes it is important, i need your prayers just once :P
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Haha..naaaice! :) Keep 'writing' ;)
@ Apparently Intellectual -
Thank you Prachi. Keep visiting :)
nice
@ Yellow Tulip -
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@ Sourav C. Pandey -
Glad to hear that you liked my post :)
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@ KParthasarathi -
Thank you so much ! Keep visiting :)
@ deepa kashyap -
Yeah, this post is related to my life Deepa. Anyways, thanks for dropping by. :)
@ Ally -
Thank you so much Ally. Keep visiting :)
@ Pooja Menon -
Thank you so much Pooja. :)
@ Richa Sharma -
Thank you so much for dropping by :)
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@ Vishal Raj -
This post is related to my life and the sequel is yet to happen, so cant write about the future without seeing what it has in store for me !
Anyways, thank you for visiting my blog :)
@ Maheshwar -
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I could feel the pain, as well as the love, but it left me with an open ending.. or an open beginning.. I don't know.. i was left looking for more... then i saw similar sentiments posted.. :) nevertheless, very beautiful post!!
@ Deeps!!
Thank you so much for dropping by. Really glad to hear that you liked my post. :)
love it :) its beautiful <3
Spellbinding!
I'm not exaggerating a wee bit; I really felt every word of what you'd written.
@ Nahla -
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@ Sayak Shome -
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:) Sweet story...
Bad that sickos are copying your works..
:) Sweet story...
@ nimis540 -
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Seems like my love story.
Thanks for sharing.
u write b'fully
:)
Nice blog.
keep it up mate
@ Bebo -
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Nice one. Long distance relationship is tough to maintain.
Good story .. and Its a true story if you had ME in mind.. ME in Uk she in india.. little did he know she was playing around he hehe :)
but hey it could be a blessing tooo Good riddance but pity those years that got wasted ...
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Loved the story
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