Monday, June 21, 2010

She never leaves me alone!

Someone ,
Is so possessive about me
Never leaves me isolated
In crowded areas
Accompany me always
In my solitude !

Someone,
Is so concerned about me
Tempt me always
To share the unshared words with her
Because others wont comprehend
What I really mean!

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When I try ,
To build relations with others
She ensures me that
They are all ordinary people
Drenched in their own self interest
Just making friendship with me .. !!

I am your truth
I am your companion

Yes, My Loneliness never leaves me alone ever!!

31 comments:

deepa kashyap said...

nice one !!
but why such condition ?? to make loneliness as your companion :/

Romeo Das said...

@ Deepa

Thanks Deepa :)
Its not actually my condition, just wanted to write something and at last came up with this.

Palak said...

haha nice one! i thought it was a bout a girl or someone who never leaves u alone..! lol

Kay said...

there's something about feeling lonely while with someone, that hurts and cuts deeper than being alone and lonely...

and if that person should leave... stop caring...

oh i have conflicting thoughts on this one :)

sakhii•• said...

paradox.

sepo said...

nice, liked it..!

Nethra said...

That was sweet. Loneliness would never make us lonely because we would always have loneliness as our companion.
Nice one! :)

Pooja Menon said...

A nice paradox! Loneliness that never leaves you lonely! A bit spooky too :P

Chocolatelover said...

Nice. :)

Romeo Das said...

@ Palak

Glad to hear that you liked it Palak. Keep visiting!

Romeo Das said...

@ Kay

Thanks for dropping by! :)

Romeo Das said...

@ sakhii••

Keep visiting !

Romeo Das said...

@ sepo

Nice to hear that you liked it. :)

Romeo Das said...

@ Nethra

Feels like I was successful in conveying my message! :)

Romeo Das said...

@ Pooja Menon

Main aur mera tanhai, aksar ye baatein kartein hain :P

Romeo Das said...

@ Chocolatelover

Thanks! Keep visiting :)

shruti.. said...

lovely and true...

Romeo Das said...

@ Shruti

Thanks Shruti. Keep visiting :)

sleeping beauty said...

akla chalo re!loneliness is a big pain and endless one too but if u see closely u are not lonelyatleast i m ur friend.

Romeo Das said...

@ sleeping beauty

Thanks for dropping by. Keep visiting! :)

Mehak said...

wow.. good one..:)
i liked the twist coz i was expecting it to be someone special who never leaves u alone rather than loneliness..

Romeo Das said...

@ Mehak

Thanks Mehak. Glad to hear that you liked it. Keep visiting! :)

An Ordinary Gal said...

creative writing..loved it :)

Romeo Das said...

@ An Ordinary Girl

Thank you so much! :)

Anirudh Induchudan said...

we are born alone..die alone..rest is a fake story...Osho has said that lonliness is sick and alonness is great...

Romeo Das said...

@ Anirudh Induchudan

Rightly said. Thanks for dropping by!

Shas said...

Nice one.

Vaudeville of exhilaration said...

I wonder how magnificently lonliness inspire every soul...

DuDo said...

I liked these lines the most

"They are all ordinary people drenched in their own self interest, just making friendship with me"

Isn't this a fact of life directly or indirectly
all are self centered and only care about their self interest???

lunchcraze said...

Beautiful......

Vishal Raj said...

Crafted nicely. Good imagination you have.

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