Saturday, August 28, 2010

Without your love

It was a Saturday night and Ronit couldn’t think of a better way than going out for dinner with his childhood sweetheart Poonam, to sort out the quarrel that they had last night. Ronit sensed there was something seriously wrong this time because of the painful silence they shared between them. After dinner was over they were driving back home. Poonam asked Ronit to pull over because she wanted to talk. She told him that it’s not working for them anymore and her feelings had changed, so probably it was time to move on.

A silent tear slid down Ronit’s cheek as he slowly reached into his pocket and passed her a folded note. At that moment, a drunk driver was speeding down that very same street. He swerved right into the drivers seat, killing Ronit.Without your love

Miraculously, Poonam survived. Remembering the note, she pulled it out and read it.

" Without your love, I would die."

12 comments:

DuDo said...

Interesting!!!! But you killed him :P Can imagine what the gal will be going through now!!!

Ads said...

oh god!!! so tragic!!!

Sourav C. Pandey said...

Poonam? x( :p

deepa kashyap said...

tune bhi maar dala Ronit ko :P

AbhiLaSH RuHeLa said...

short and good one..

Yellow Tulip said...

beautiful....short but filled with dramatic emotions

Toyin O. said...

poor girl; great story.

http://youcanfacetodaybecausehelives.blogspot.com

inmylineofsight.com said...

it wudve had a happier n sweet ending if he had survived..
anyway nice work.. :)

Sweta said...

hmmm... not close to reality but love stories are always special...
good one :)

prakhar rastogi said...

so fairy.....

Rajlakshmi said...

touching.

Defiant Princess said...

very touching.

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