Yesterday I spent the full day with my girl,
What a feeling it was to see her smile and blush,
We were two birds free to explore the skies,
It all felt so beautiful and nice.
I travelled 7 hours to meet her now,
My heart beating faster and now time was slow,
I called her and told her I am here,
The joy and excitement had to be there.
Then she came from the back to surprise me,
Wow!! More beautiful than any girl I have ever seen,
She smiled and hugged me with all the love,
The skies were celebrating the union of the doves.
Her eyes mesmerized my senses hypnotized,
Her smile was a beautiful poem unexpressed,
Her blush made a new meaning of beauty,
I was like the priest and she my Goddess-deity.
We talked all day and all night long,
Her voice was like the best ever heard song,
Her touch made me feel warm and secure,
What a feeling it was to be with my dear.
Feelings and emotions for her, hidden inside,
Further rules I couldn’t abide
I kissed her tender lips, slowly, I motioned toward her,
Holding her close to my heart.
Softly, I bring her head to mine,
Faintly whispering the only words that come to mind,
"I love you."
33 comments:
Howdy.... Found my way here through my blog. Love the post :)
liked :)
Nicely done.one of the things about romantic poetry is that there is so much of it around that it is hard to come up with some original.I think your lines hold a certain amount of simplicity in them and yet creating the right mood.
lovely poem......romantic flavours.
Nice! :)
Din't know that you write poems too.
really beautiful poem! :)
all the best for BAT!
Leo - Hidden
True to your name,the post drips with the pure exhilaration of being with someone special(and given the pathos in your post,i guess its drawn from real life !!).
A refreshingly positive take on the topic and a wonderful read.
emoting lines...
hidden feelings....now explored and felt
nice one buddy:)
Why face hidden?
Beautiful poem I wonder why their faces must be hidden...maybe because of the prompt HIDDEN!LOls!
LOved the message!
Good luck for BATOM!
very nice post...nice :D
So very romantic , put in rhymingly best simple words !! :) Wonderful ! :) All the best for BATOM :)
Beautiful!
Hidden - The painter!
gud poem with a very wonderful picture..:)
Beautiful!!
"Her eyes mesmerized my senses hypnotized"!!
nice songs on yr playlist!
love this text :) it touchs me...
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lovely poem
Loved the line "her smile was a beautiful poem expressed"
@ Phantom
Thanks Phantom !
@ Sepo
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@ Gyanban
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@ Mahesh Kalaal
Thanks Mahesh !
@ Nethra
You are yet to know many things about me ;)
@ Leo
Thanks Leo !
@ Brijender Singh
Yeah its drawn from real life ! Thanks for dropping by :)
@ Amity
Yeah its because of the topic 'Hidden' :P
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@ Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe
Thanks Siddhesh !
@ adreamygal
Thank you so much. Those words mean a lot to me :)
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